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So I am experiencing things with my next one shot pages and I am particularly putting effort into mastering the art of halftoning. I am just uploading this page (it is not the first one from the story) because i want to see how it will be perceived on a website, with various screen or phones of different size.

Please if you have a minute, do not hesitate to tell me what do you think of this halftoning. I made the dots quite small, they can be wider, so, how does it looks like to you? Do you see the dots or does the gray areas look uniform? Do you see squares made by the dots groups? Does it hurt your eye or is it what you are used to see?

And finally do you prefer this one here or that: lyrykenlied.deviantart.com/art…